Assignment 5 Critique

 

Critique:

  • The first 11 seconds can be taken out. They are not pertinent to the overall explanation.
  • There are timing issues when one sphere stops and another continues to move. I need to change these around so it looks purposeful and adds more to the overall piece.
  • There is a giant pause that I need to shorten where there was a breath taken.
  • I also need to add an ending.
  • There is a good opportunity to animate the water at the end and I can end off of that.
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