- The first 11 seconds can be taken out. They are not pertinent to the overall explanation.
- There are timing issues when one sphere stops and another continues to move. I need to change these around so it looks purposeful and adds more to the overall piece.
- There is a giant pause that I need to shorten where there was a breath taken.
- I also need to add an ending.
- There is a good opportunity to animate the water at the end and I can end off of that.